{"id":562,"date":"2013-05-19T08:46:59","date_gmt":"2013-05-19T12:46:59","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/vweisfeld.com\/?p=562"},"modified":"2013-05-19T08:46:59","modified_gmt":"2013-05-19T12:46:59","slug":"an-authors-handshake","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/vweisfeld.com\/?p=562","title":{"rendered":"An Author&#8217;s Handshake"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"http:\/\/imgembed.com\/portfolio-image.php?username=orangegodd&#038;id=25465&#038;filename=image-4.jpg\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/imgembed.com\/embed\/359339\/-\/226\/153\" title=\"Parisian back street\" alt=\"Pondering?\" \/><\/a><br \/>\nWhen you crack open a novel, you\u2019ve already committed to read at least a few chapters. Rarely would you abandon it after the first few paragraphs. Not so a short story. Its opening\u2014even its first sentence\u2014is crucial. First sentences \u201cestablish the authorial confidence that is absolutely necessary for successful fiction. If a reader is going to follow you, it\u2019s important that they know from the very first line that they can trust the story.\u201d It\u2019s the literary equivalent of \u201cYou had me from \u2018hello,\u2019\u201d the journalist\u2019s hook.<\/p>\n<p>The above quote is from an interview with author Josh Rolnick in the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.ericwasserman.com\/docs\/Rolnick_Glimmer_Train.pdf\">spring 2013 issue of <i>Glimmer Train<\/i>.<\/a> He and the interviewer talk about the importance of \u201copening narrative space,\u201d which is an arty way of saying making the reader believe \u201canything can happen.\u201d One of the most memorable opening lines is, and we all know this one, whether we\u2019ve read Kafka\u2019s novella or not, \u201cOne morning, when Gregor Samsa woke from troubled dreams, he found himself transformed in his bed into a horrible vermin,\u201d although I\u2019m positive that in the translation I read an astonishing number of decades ago, those last two words were \u201cgiant cockroach.\u201d Kafka never exactly says. Whatever. You absolutely can\u2019t stop there.<\/p>\n<p>Examples of short story first lines I think compel further reading:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cThe Potts girl walked into the caf\u00e9 preceded by her reputation so that everyone was obliged to stare.\u201d \u2013 \u201cSundowners,\u201d by Monica Ali<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>In his first dreamy meditations over the case, Mr. Fortune remarked that it suggested one answer to the hard question why boys should be boys.\u201d \u2013 \u201cThe Dead Leaves,\u201d by H.C. Bailey<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201cIn the autumn of 1971 a man used to come to our house, bearing confections in his pocket and hopes of ascertaining the life or death of his family.\u201d \u2013 \u201cWhen Mr. Pirzada Came to Dine,\u201d by Jhumpa Lahiri<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>The first line of Rolnick\u2019s own short story, \u201cFunnyboy,\u201d like the three above, is filled with plot possibilities: \u201cI glanced out the window as my train pulled into the station and saw the girl who killed my son.\u201d From that point, this story could travel anywhere, though you sense not anywhere particularly good.<\/p>\n<p>But the opener needn\u2019t so effectively forecast the coming drama, like the examples above. It can draw you in through its description of a particular time and place or the mood it sets, like Lauren Groff\u2019s opener for \u201cDelicate Edible Birds\u201d: \u201cBecause it had rained and the rain had caught the black soot of the factories as they burned, Paris in the dark seemed covered by a dusky skin, almost as though it were living.\u201d You want to take her hand and go there with her.<\/p>\n<p>Writing the first few sentences of a short story is laying down a marker. \u201cI promise to show you this,\u201d the author says. They create a door you must open, a street you must walk down. The page you must turn.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>When you crack open a novel, you\u2019ve already committed to read at least a few chapters. Rarely would you abandon it after the first few paragraphs. Not so a short story. Its opening\u2014even its first sentence\u2014is crucial. 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